DUUUUDE. SO MUCH LOVE FOR SO MANY THINGS: the way you shift the tone from the awesome lols of Amy commenting on the Doctor and Master's relationship to her sense of betrayal and the uncertainty of what was the right thing to do; the bit about Mels, paralleling her with the Master; the quiet, reflective coda, which feels so very Three-ish, and then finishing with AWESOME GLEE at the chocolate and she SLAPS THE DOCTOR HAND FOR TRYING TO NICK MORE. A gloriously spot-on bit of characterisation.
And much as I love Doctor/Master, this story's just made me desperate for more Master and Amy. I love the relationship you developed between then two of them. It's one I can believe in, and that you manage to make fun, touching and not entirely safe.
The Brigadier raised the other eyebrow, managing to silence both protesting Time Lords with some super power that Amy was jealous of.
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Date: 2011-10-29 02:43 am (UTC)And much as I love Doctor/Master, this story's just made me desperate for more Master and Amy. I love the relationship you developed between then two of them. It's one I can believe in, and that you manage to make fun, touching and not entirely safe.
The Brigadier raised the other eyebrow, managing to silence both protesting Time Lords with some super power that Amy was jealous of.
This line makes me incredibly happy.